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Standard English ConventionsVery hardFinite verb forms and tense consistency in a series of clauses

Standard English Conventions practice question

In the workshops that produced Mughal miniature paintings, labor was minutely divided: one specialist sketched the composition in thin red outline, a second ____ the burnished gold leaf, and a third, working with a brush made from a few squirrel hairs, painted the faces.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

  1. A. appliedCorrect
  2. B. applying
  3. C. applies
  4. D. to apply

Answer: A. applied

The colon introduces three parallel clauses, each with a subject and a finite past-tense verb: 'one specialist sketched,' 'a second applied,' 'a third ... painted.' Only 'applied' supplies a finite verb in the past tense required by 'sketched' and 'painted.' (B) 'applying' is a participle, not a finite verb, so 'a second applying the burnished gold leaf' has no predicate—the reader is tempted by it because the third item also contains a participial phrase ('working with a brush'), but that phrase is a modifier attached to a clause that does have a verb. (C) 'applies' is finite but shifts to the present tense, breaking the past-tense frame of the surrounding clauses. (D) 'to apply' is an infinitive, another nonfinite form that leaves the middle item without a predicate.

Why the other answers are wrong

B. applying
"Applying" is a participle, not a finite verb, so the middle item is left with no predicate; the participial phrase "working with a brush" in the third item is only a modifier attached to a clause that does have a verb ("painted").
C. applies
"Applies" is finite, but it shifts to the present tense while "sketched" and "painted" are past — all three parallel clauses need the same tense.
D. to apply
"To apply" is an infinitive, a nonfinite form, so "a second to apply the burnished gold leaf" has no verb to match "sketched" and "painted."

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