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Standard English ConventionsVery hardSemicolon between clauses containing their own commas

Standard English Conventions practice question

The first draft ran to four hundred pages ____ the final version, trimmed by a ruthless editor, was barely half that.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

  1. A. pages; the finalCorrect
  2. B. pages, the final
  3. C. pages the final
  4. D. pages: and the final

Answer: A. pages; the final

Both halves are complete sentences, and the second contains its own commas. A semicolon marks the boundary between them clearly.

Why the other answers are wrong

B. pages, the final
A comma alone between two complete sentences is a splice — and here it would get lost among the other commas.
C. pages the final
Nothing at the boundary leaves the sentences run together.
D. pages: and the final
A colon could introduce the second clause on its own, but 'and' after it is not allowed.

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