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Expression of IdeasEasyRhetorical synthesis: emphasizing a similarity

Expression of Ideas practice question

While researching pollinators, a student has taken the following notes: • Honeybees live together in large colonies. • Honeybees make honey and store it in combs made of wax. • Mason bees live alone rather than in colonies. • Mason bees build nests inside hollow plant stems, sealing them with mud. • Both honeybees and mason bees pollinate fruit trees.

The student wants to emphasize a similarity between honeybees and mason bees. Which choice best uses the notes to accomplish this goal?

  1. A. Honeybees make honey, which they store in combs made of wax.
  2. B. Both honeybees and mason bees pollinate fruit trees, though honeybees live in large colonies and mason bees live alone.Correct
  3. C. Unlike honeybees, which live together in large colonies, mason bees live alone.
  4. D. Mason bees build their nests inside hollow plant stems, sealing the nests with mud.

Answer: B. Both honeybees and mason bees pollinate fruit trees, though honeybees live in large colonies and mason bees live alone.

B is correct because it states a trait the two kinds of bees share—pollinating fruit trees—and explicitly frames it as something "both" bees do, which fulfills the goal of emphasizing a similarity. A encodes the error of selecting an accurate but irrelevant note about only one bee; no comparison is made at all. C encodes the error of emphasizing a difference (signaled by "Unlike") rather than a similarity. D encodes the same one-animal-only error as A, describing a mason bee behavior that honeybees do not share.

Why the other answers are wrong

A. Honeybees make honey, which they store in combs made of wax.
This is an accurate note, but it describes only honeybees and makes no comparison at all, so it can't emphasize a shared trait.
C. Unlike honeybees, which live together in large colonies, mason bees live alone.
The word 'Unlike' signals a difference — living in colonies versus alone — but the goal is to emphasize a similarity.
D. Mason bees build their nests inside hollow plant stems, sealing the nests with mud.
This describes a mason bee behavior that honeybees don't share, so it names a distinguishing trait rather than a similarity.

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